Why is euthanasia a big issue? Do you think it should be legalized in your country? What is the diff
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Euthanasia was the issue that has been discussed for a decade. I think nobody want to finish their life even if they are under the bad condition. I have seen many patients who want to live another day after they heard that there was no probability which they can live from their disease. We have seen a lot of cases who want to be killed by other people if their pain was extremely severe. However, I am sure that they would like to be recovered and keep their personal life. The first value that we have is human\'s dignity so, nobody can end someone\'s live even though, somebody would like to finish their live due to various reason. My country had a euthanasia case few year ago. It doesn\'t mean that we will conduct it actively. I think that we can decide whatever related with our life, but regarding this issue, we have to be more careful to carry out it.
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Euthanasia was the issue that has been discussed for a decade.
>>> CORRECT
I think nobody want to finish their life even if they are under the bad condition.
>>> I think nobody wans to end his life even if they are under bad conditions.
I have seen many patients who want to live another day after they heard that there was no probability which they can live from their disease.
>>> I have seen many patients who want to live more after they heard that there will be no probability that they can live from their disease.
We have seen a lot of cases who want to be killed by other people if their pain was extremely severe.
>>> We have seen a lot of cases who wanted to be killed by other people if their pain is extremely severe.
However, I am sure that they would like to be recovered and keep their personal life.
>>> However, I am sure that they would like to recover and live.
The first value that we have is human\'s dignity so, nobody can end someone\'s live even though, somebody would like to finish their live due to various reasons.
>>> CORRECT
My country had a euthanasia case few year ago.
>>> CORRECT
It doesn\'t mean that we will conduct it actively.
>>> CORRECT
I think that we can decide whatever related with our life, but regarding this issue, we have to be more careful to carry out it.
>>> I think that we can decide whatever is related to our life, but regarding this issue, we have to be more careful to carry it out.
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