Why is family important?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, I think family is really important because they have people who can give you joy. It means that they can enjoy and spend time with their family members. Sometimes, they will have some little argueing like choosing a food and when something is wrong. Eventhough they argue and have bad feelings to each other, they will soon be happy. So, family really is important than anybody because they know our feelings and they are the closest!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for providing your opinion.
I agree that family is really important and I think it\'s the most important unit in our society.
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: In my opinion, I think family is really important because they are people who can provide happiness to us.
It means that they can enjoy and spend time with their family members.
>> CORRECT.
Sometimes, they will have some little argueing like choosing a food and when something is wrong.
>> Sometimes, they will have little arguments like choosing a food and when something is wrong.
Even though they argue and have bad feelings to each other, they will soon be happy.
>> CORRECT.
So, family really is important than anybody because they know our feelings and they are the closest!
>> CORRECT.
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