Why is financial stability important?
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Obviously, it\'s a very critical key to keep making a living. If when you became an adult, you don\'t have an ability to keep your life. I think your life could be devastated and discouraged. In addition to that, There\'s a saying that if you\'re chased by money, you can\'t afford to live. Of course, I can\'t live my life doing what I like, but whether I like it or not, I have to be financially stable in order to improve my quality of life.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Obviously, it\'s a very critical key to keep making a living.
>> CORRECT!If when you became an adult, you don\'t have an ability to keep your life.
>> When you became an adult, you don\'t have an ability to keep your life.
OR >> If you became an adult, you don\'t have an ability to keep your life.
I think your life could be devastated and discouraged.
>> CORRECT!In addition to that, There\'s a saying that if you\'re chased by money, you can\'t afford to live.
>> CORRECT!Of course, I can\'t live my life doing what I like, but whether I like it or not, I have to be financially stable in order to improve my quality of life.
>> CORRECT!
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