Why is gambling addictive?
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Why is gambling addictive?
I know the reason why people are addictive at gambling. It’s because a change in gamblers perception of money. People used to get a large sum of money without any their efforts. So they are unaware of the value of money. And there are also a lot of people who chose suicide themselves. Someone think little sum of money for gambling is okay. But I don’t think like them. There is a saying like that ‘He that will steal an egg will steal on ox’. So it means they can’t quit from gambling without bankrupt.
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Good afternoon Harry! ^^
Thank you for writing this insightful essay.
I agree that a person\'s perception of money will definitely determine his/her financial status in life.
Thank you for writing this insightful essay.
I agree that a person\'s perception of money will definitely determine his/her financial status in life.
I think gambling is addictive because it\'s exciting. It gives people the feeling of rush from winning that\'s why they keep on gambling even when they are losing a lot of money.
In conclusion, gambling is not good because there\'s a higher possibility that you will lose everything as compared to gaining everything.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having an awesome day.
See you in class later. :)
In conclusion, gambling is not good because there\'s a higher possibility that you will lose everything as compared to gaining everything.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having an awesome day.
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> I know the reason why people are addicted to gambling.
It’s because a change in gamblers perception of money.
>> It’s because of a change in a gambler\'s perception of money.
People used to get a large sum of money without any their efforts.
>> People are used to getting a large sum of money without any effort.
So they are unaware of the value of money.
>> CORRECT!
And there are also a lot of people who chose suicide themselves.
>> In addition, there were also a lot of people who chose to commit suicide because of this.
Someone think little sum of money for gambling is okay.
>> Some think a little sum of money for gambling is okay.
But I don’t think like them.
>> CORRECT!
There is a saying like that ‘He that will steal an egg will steal on ox’.
>> There is a saying that goes, ‘He who steals an egg, will steal on ox’.
So it means they can’t quit from gambling without bankrupt.
>> So it means they can’t quit from gambling without getting bankrupt.
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