Why is honesty important? How can you be honest and not hurt someone?

2019-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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honesty....is too difficult. I really can not tell with Korean about it But I know honesty is very important in our life. And I allways try to everythings!!! Anyway, I think honesty is the most basic of life like water. And honesty is previous steps of love when I love me then loves another peoples Please...Give me easy subject....!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for your effort in doing your homework. This homework is easy but I will give you simpler homework next time. ^_^

honesty....is too difficult.
>>>Honesty is too difficult.
I really can not tell with Korean about it
>>>I really can not tell to Koreans about it.
OR>>>I can\'t be honest to Koreans.
And I allways try to everythings!!!
>>>And I always try everything!
Anyway, I think honesty is the most basic of life like water.
>>> Anyway, I think honesty is the most basic thing in life like water.
And honesty is previous steps of love
>>> And being honest is one of the steps of love.
when I love me then loves another peoples
>>> When I love myself, then I can love another person.
OR>>>If you learn how to love yourself, then you can love other people.


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