Why is it beneficial to take part in school organizations/clubs?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, it can be helpful to socialize with different type of people.
In school organizations, there is various person with each personality and interest.
If we communicate each other, we can share diverse topics and lives through conversation.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Se [이름]!
In my opinion, it can be helpful to socialize with different types of people.
>>> correct
In school organizations, there is various person with each personality and interest.
In school organizations, there is various person with each personality and interest.
>>> In school organizations, there are various person with different personalities and interests.
>>> OR: In school organizations, there are various person with each having different personalities and interests.
If we communicate each other, we can share diverse topics and lives through conversation.
>>> If we communicate with each other, we can share diverse topics and lives through conversations.
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