Why is it good to save money?
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Because if we save money we can be a rich.
And we can buy any things too.
And we can go school and academys.
And lastly we can help many persons.
These reason are save money is good.
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Because if we save money we can be a rich.
>> Saving money is good because if we save money, we can be rich in the future.
And we can buy any things too.
>> We can also buy anything.
And we can go school and academys.
>> We can also go to any schools and academies.
And lastly we can help many persons.
>> Lastly, we can also help many people.
These reason are save money is good.
>> These are the reasons why saving money is good.
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