Why is it important for children to spend time with adults? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
Children should be care for and protected by adults.
That\'s why they can grow up emotionally stable
and learn socially relationships.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Children should be care for and protected by adults.
>> Children should be cared for and protected by adults.
That\'s why they can grow up emotionally stable and learn socially relationships.
That\'s why they can grow up emotionally stable and learn socially relationships.
>> This is so that they can grow up emotionally stable and learn how to handle social relationships.
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