Why is it important for everyone to learn how to use technology?
학생이 쓴 원문
The technology has been changed very rapidly after the Industry revolution.
If you didn\'t learn new technology, you can\'t be adapted in mordern city.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
The technology has been changed very rapidly after the Industry revolution.
If you didn\'t learn new technology, you can\'t be adapted in mordern city.
If you didn\'t learn new technology, you can\'t be adapted in mordern city.
>> Technology has changed very rapidly since the Industrial Revolution.
If you don’t learn new technologies, you won’t be able to adapt to modern city life.
If you don’t learn new technologies, you won’t be able to adapt to modern city life.
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