Why is it important for us to save money?
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We spend a lot of money anytime like home, TV. So it\'s inevitable our life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Na [이름]! Yes, you are right. Life needs money for many things like home, TV, and food. That is why saving money is very important.
~T. Jenna
We spend a lot of money anytime like home, TV.
>>We spend a lot of money on things like a home or a TV.
So it\'s inevitable our life.
>>So, it is inevitable in our life.
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We spend a lot of money on things like a home or TV, so spending is inevitable in our life. That is why it is important to save money for the future, emergencies, and important things we want.
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