Why is it important to focus when you study?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think study is very important because study important become to very excellent people.
So study is important.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
Here is your first revised composition for today. The corrected version is shown below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Why is it important to focus when you study?
I think study is very important because study important become to very excellent people.
>>> I think studying is very important because it helps people become excellent.
So study is important.
>>> So, studying is important.
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