Why is it important to study English?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s because if I study English, I can use this language for my life and exams. When I go to a good university or get some good work, I will need English a lot because these days are global generation. Also, it is good when I travel to abroad. If I don\'t get some help from translater, I can speak English so it is comfortable to travel.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for doing your homework. You\'re doing a wonderful job. Please take not of the minor revisions I made on your sentences. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
It\'s because if I study English, I can use this language for my life and exams.
>> Correct
When I go to a good university or get some good work, I will need English a lot because these days are global generation.
>>When I go to a good university or find good work, I will need English a lot because we are living in a globalized generation.
Also, it is good when I travel to abroad.
>> It will also be beneficial when I travel abroad.
If I don\'t get some help from translater, I can speak English so it is comfortable to travel.
>> If I don\'t get help from a translator, I can still speak English comfortably when traveling.
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