Why is it important to study English?
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It is actually very important for me to study English. The main reason is that I have a dream to go to Harvard university in United States.This is my dream, also my mom’s dream. I want to study in Harvard where is top of the world with all of the geniuses in the future. After graduating elementary school, I’m going to go to international school to prepare for college in United States. That is why I need to be super good at English not only speaking but also writing.
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It is actually very important for me to study English. The main
reason is that I have a dream to go to Harvard university in United
States.This is my dream, also my mom’s dream. I want to study in Harvard
where is top of the world with all of the geniuses in the future. After
graduating elementary school, I’m going to go to international school
to prepare for college in United States. That is why I need to be super
good at English not only speaking but also writing.
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It is actually very important for me to study English. The main
reason is that I have a dream to go to Harvard university in the United
States.This is my dream and also my mom’s dream. I want to study in Harvard
where it is considered top of the world in school with all of the geniuses in the future. After
graduating elementary school, I’m going to go to international school
to prepare for college in United States. That is why I need to be super
good at English not only speaking but also writing.
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