Why is it necessary to be updated about the news?
학생이 쓴 원문
it is necessary to be updated about the news.
there are some reason why i think so.
first of all, if i updated about the news, i can communicate with others easily.
second, actually i\'m a job seeker, so i always watch the news and read articles.
it helps me prepare for the interview.
so it is very necessary to update the news.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I agree with you, being updated with the news is necessary.
- T. Beth
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it is necessary to be updated about the news.>>> correct ( It is necessary to be updated about the news. )
there are some reason why i think so.
>>> There are some reasons why I think so.
first of all, if i updated about the news, i can communicate with others easily.
>>> First of all, if I am updated about the news, I can communicate with others easily.
second, actually i\'m a job seeker, so i always watch the news and read articles.
>>> Second, i\'m actually a job seeker, so I always watch the news and read articles.
it helps me prepare for the interview.
>>> >>> correct ( It helps me prepare for the interview. )
so it is very necessary to update the news.
>>> So it is very necessary to be updated with the news.
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