Why is it necessary to keep in touch with others?
학생이 쓴 원문
Human is the social animals through communicate with others. If men lives without any communication, they will fell lonely and alienated.
So it is necessary to keep in touch with others through phone or text message.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]. Thank you or this. In addition, we maintain our relationship with other people through keeping in touch.
- T. Beth
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Human is the social animals through communicate with others. >>> Humans are social animals by communicating with others.
If men lives without any communication, they will fell lonely and alienated.
>>> If men live without any communication, they will feel lonely and alienated.
So it is necessary to keep in touch with others through phone or text message.
>>> correct
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