Why is it not good to overwork?
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I don\'t like to overwork. Because I can\'t receive payment from my company for overwork, I think that it is better than overwork. I want to have more time for us.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I don\'t like to overwork. Because I can\'t receive payment from my company for overwork,
>>I don\'t like to overwork because I don\'t receive any payment from my company if I do.
2. I think that it is better than overwork.
>>So, I think it is better not to overwork.
3. I want to have more time for us.
>>I also want to have more time for myself and my family.
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