Why is it that confidence is important?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my own opinion, I think confidence is important because if we don\'t have one we will be too worried. For example, if someone has to do a presentation and that person has no confidence, they will be worried and also speaking in low voice. And for some people who don\'t have a confidence they will be so nervous and will think that they are doing bad. So, if someone loses confidence, they will think they are doing wrong and sometimes get awful score. Lastly, confidence is really important because we feel good and not to worried.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sending your homework to me.
I agree that confidence is one of the most important things a person should have.
So, I hope that you will continue to gain confidence in facing things that come your way. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
For example, if someone has to do a presentation and that person has no confidence, they will be worried and also speaking in low voice.
>> For example, if someone has to do a presentation and that person has no confidence, they will be worried and will also be speaking in a low voice.
And for some people who don\'t have a confidence they will be so nervous and will think that they are doing bad.
>> And for some people who don\'t have confidence, they will be so nervous and will think that they are doing bad.
So, if someone loses confidence, they will think they are doing wrong and sometimes get awful score.
>> So, if someone loses confidence, they will think they are doing wrong and sometimes gets an awful score.
Lastly, confidence is really important because we feel good and not to worried.
>> Lastly, confidence is really important because we feel good and not worried.
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