Why is it that it is not good to eat late at night? Tell me about your eating habits
학생이 쓴 원문
Why is it that it is not good to eat late at night? Tell me about your eating habits
Fruit and vegetable are healthful.But I don\'t like it.
I like snack and bread.So I\'m going to fat.
4 years ago It\'s ok.because I exercised one hour
five time a week.
I felt It\'s not good.
I try to change my eating habits.
I eat more vegetable than meat.
And a late night don\'t eat food anymore.
If I\'m hungry.I can drink milk and water.
강사 첨삭
Hi JO!
I see you improving a lot in your sentence construction. Please review the corrections given below for you to improve more.
Good luck, Buddy!
Here are the corrections.
Fruit and vegetable are healthful.But I don\'t like it.
>> Fruits and vegetables are healthy. But, I don\'t like them.
I like snack and bread.So I\'m going to fat.
>> I like snacks and bread. So, I\'m getting fatter.
4 years ago It\'s ok.because I exercised one hour five time a week.
>> 4 years ago, it\'s okay because I exercised five times a week for an hour.
I felt It\'s not good.
>> I felt it\'s not good.
I try to change my eating habits.
>> Correct!
I eat more vegetable than meat.
>> I eat more vegetables than meat.
And a late night don\'t eat food anymore.
>> And at late nights, I don\'t eat food anymore.
If I\'m hungry.I can drink milk and water.
>> If I\'m hungry, I can drink milk and water.
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