Why is it the responsibility of our government to shelter homeless people?
학생이 쓴 원문
The government should shelter homeless people.
This is because the role of government is helping citizens.
They should try hard for improving the citizens\' lives.
Especially, homeless people need some helps.
However, other people are not afford to help them because they are too busy to live their lives.
This is why the government should help homeless people.
Nobody can, but the government can help them.
They have to protect homeless people, and also ensure their lives.
강사 첨삭
Hi Chloe! Thank you for the effort to answer your homework. You have answered the question very well. Keep it up! Have a nice day! Below are your corrections.
- Teacher Sandy -
>> The government should give shelter to homeless people.
This is because the role of government is helping citizens.
This is because the role of government is helping citizens.
>> This is because the role of the government is to help the citizens.
They should try hard for improving the citizens\' lives.
They should try hard for improving the citizens\' lives.
>> They should try hard in improving the citizens\' lives.
Especially, homeless people need some helps.
Especially, homeless people need some helps.
>> Especially that homeless people need some help.
However, other people are not afford to help them because they are too busy to live their lives.
However, other people are not afford to help them because they are too busy to live their lives.
>> However, other people cannot help them because they are too busy with their own lives.
This is why the government should help homeless people.
This is why the government should help homeless people.
>> correct
Nobody can, but the government can help them.
Nobody can, but the government can help them.
>> correct
They have to protect homeless people, and also ensure their lives.
They have to protect homeless people, and also ensure their lives.
>> correct
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