Why is proper waste disposal important?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s because if we dispose the trash carelessly, it can cause pollution of environment. If we keep a way of protect our environment from pollution, w3 can save the energy and the earth. I think the big key point is do not waste as one pleases.
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Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
It\'s because if we dispose the trash carelessly, it can cause pollution of environment.
>>It\'s because if we dispose of trash carelessly, it can cause environmental pollution.
If we keep a way of protect our environment from pollution, w3 can save the energy and the earth.
>> If we adopt methods to protect our environment from pollution, we can save both energy and the Earth.
I think the big key point is do not waste as one pleases.
>> Correct
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