Why is reading a good hobby? / How would you describe a perfect weekend?
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1. Why is reading a good hobby?
Reading gets us to have a sight that we can see the world in various aspects.
It occurs curiousness of human by letting us know fields that we haven\\\'t known and makes base for us to do new challenge. 
I think reading is a presence to encourage hope to feel kind of fluttering and excited while people have been through.
2.How would you describe a perfect weekend?
For this weekend, I have several things to do on Saturday. Though I also like these activities and an E person, I prefer spending my own time to them these days. I would like to be lost in thought myself.
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Thank you for this [이름]. Have a great weekend!
1. Why is reading a good hobby?
Reading gets us to have a sight that we can see the world in various aspects.
>>> Reading helps us to get an insight to see the world in various aspects.
It occurs curiousness of human by letting us know fields that we haven\\\'t known and makes base for us to do new challenge.
2.How would you describe a perfect weekend?
For this weekend, I have several things to do on Saturday.
Reading gets us to have a sight that we can see the world in various aspects.
>>> Reading helps us to get an insight to see the world in various aspects.
It occurs curiousness of human by letting us know fields that we haven\\\'t known and makes base for us to do new challenge.
>>> It stimulates the curiosity of human by letting us know fields that we haven\'t known and they serve as basis for us to do new challenges.
I think reading is a presence to encourage hope to feel kind of fluttering and excited while people have been through.
>>> I think reading is a way to encourage the hope to feel kind fluttered and excited with what people have been through.
I think reading is a presence to encourage hope to feel kind of fluttering and excited while people have been through.
>>> I think reading is a way to encourage the hope to feel kind fluttered and excited with what people have been through.
2.How would you describe a perfect weekend?
For this weekend, I have several things to do on Saturday.
>>> correct
Though I also like these activities and an E person, I prefer spending my own time to them these days.
>>> Though I also like these activities and an E person, I prefer spending my own time on them these days.
I would like to be lost in thought myself.
>>> I would like to be lost in my own thoughts.
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