Why is regret important?
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Human is not 100% perfect. Every moment we do make a mistake and learn something while we try to fix it. Regret feeling is very shame and nobody wants to feel regret in their life. But we realize it is a must step to go to another level. I also regret a lot like doing immature behavior to my friend, family members and the people around me. And I had been too proud of myself and sometimes I judge the people with my shallow standard. Now I think I am very weak person and can not live along. I learn modesty attitude and how to boost other people up. I just wish I do not much regret the last day in my life. I think regret feeling guide me on a better life.
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Human is not 100% perfect. >> Humans are not 100% perfect.
Every moment we do make a mistake and learn something while we try to fix it.
>> CORRECT
Regret feeling is very shame and nobody wants to feel regret in their life.
>> Regrets make you feel ashamed and nobody wants to feel that way in their life.
But we realize it is a must step to go to another level.
>> But we realize that it is a must to go to another level.
I also regret a lot like doing immature behavior to my friend, family members and the people around me.
>> I also regret a lot like doing immature behavior to my friend, family members and the other people around me.
And I had been too proud of myself and sometimes I judge the people with my shallow standard.
>> And I had been too proud of myself and sometimes I judge people with my shallow standard.
Now I think I am very weak person and can not live along.
>> Now I think I am a very weak person and cannot live along.
I learn modesty attitude and how to boost other people up.
>> I have learned modesty and how to boost other people up.
I just wish I do not much regret the last day in my life.
>> I just wish I do not have much regrets in the last days of my life.
I think regret feeling guide me on a better life.
>> I think feelings of regrets guide me toward a better life.
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