Why is religion a taboo?

Every person has a lot of individual experiences in their lives and some of them are able to make invisible wall which has blocked from other communities. My best friend, when I was a middle school student, was a devout Christian. I could not understand him why he went to church every Sunday, even the day before we had important exam. I used to tempt him not to go there, not only for studying together, also for his better score. One time I succeeded this, but the result was not good. Nowadays, I a little bit figure out this reason. He might get intangible values from his religious work that much more crucial, but I cannot know. Like my episode, people can find different answers which are easy to cause exhausting arguments. Non-religious people insist that we are living in the era of rationality and we can solve with our knowledge and science. However, I cannot deny religions help us keep humanity.Therefore, it would be usually better to admit each other, not to criticize opposite parts

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Why is religion a taboo?

Every person has a lot of individual experiences in their lives and some of them are able to make invisible wall which has blocked from other communities.

>>Every person has a lot of individual experiences in their lives and some of them were able to create invisible walls, which has blocked them from other people and even from communities.

My best friend, when I was a middle school student, was a devout Christian.

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or>>My best friend in middle school was a devout Christian.

I could not understand him why he went to church every Sunday, even the day before we had important exam.

>>I could not understand him why he went to church every Sunday, even on the day before we had an important exam.

I used to tempt him not to go there, not only for studying together, also for his better score.

>>I used to tempt him not to go there, not only for us to be able to study together, but also for him to get a better score.

One time I succeeded this, but the result was not good.

>>One time, I succeeded in this attempt, but the result was not good.

Nowadays, I a little bit figure out this reason.

>>Nowadays, I can figure out his reasons a little bit more.

He might get intangible values from his religious work that much more crucial, but I cannot know.

>>He might have benefited some intangible values from his religious works that can be much more crucial, but I won’t be able to know.

Like my episode, people can find different answers which are easy to cause exhausting arguments.

>>Like my episodes in life, people can find different answers which are easy to cause exhausting arguments.

Non-religious people insist that we are living in the era of rationality and we can solve with our knowledge and science.

>>Non-religious people insist that we are living in the era of rationality, so we can solve anything with our own knowledge and with science.

However, I cannot deny religions help us keep humanity.

>>However, I cannot deny that religions help us stay as humans.

Therefore, it would be usually better to admit each other, not to criticize opposite parts.

>>Therefore, it is usually better to admit each other’s religions, and not to criticize our opposing views.