Why is studying well necessary especially in my country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
In my country\'s culture, anywhere require more qualifications t[이름] necessary. One of the representative things is academic clique. Also English grade is same. Because of this reason, many people no choice but to study hard. But, I think it always is not bad. Because these things affect growth of my country. If it\'s unfair, we can study more. Because the people who get high academic clique and English grade tried to study hard.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ho! T[이름]k you for always taking the time to do your homework!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>In my country\'s culture, any company requires more qualifications t[이름] necessary.
One of the representative things is academic clique.
>>One of the most important things is the academic clique.
OR>>One of the most important things that represent a person is the academic clique.
Also English grade is same.
>>Also, the English grade is the same.
Because of this reason, many people no choice but to study hard.
>>Because of this reason, many people have no choice but to study hard.
But, I think it always is not bad.
>>But, I think it is not always bad.
Because these things affect growth of my country.
>>Because these things affect the growth of my country.
If it\'s unfair, we can study more.
>>CORRECT
Because the people who get high academic clique and English grades tried to study hard.
>>CORRECT
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