Why is studying well necessary especially in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
If s student study well, he/she can get a chance to enter the top university. After graduate high university, he/she can choose the job which they he/she wants. That’s practical part.
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If s student study well, he/she can get a chance to enter the top university.
>>If a student studied well, he/she can get a chance to enter the top university.
OR>>If a student studied well, he/she can get a chance to be admitted the top university.
After graduate high university, he/she can choose the job which they he/she wants.
>>After graduating high university, he/ she can choose the job which he/she wants.
OR>>After graduating in the top university, he/ she can choose the job which he/she wants.
That’s practical part.
>>That\'s the practical part.
OR>>That\'s a practical part.
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