Why is studying well necessary especially in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there are some reasons about that. First, korean people think importantly studying level historically.
In korea, studying is very important since ancient. Nobles had to study. And now, it became that people think studying make people\'s position get highly. So, korean parents concern highly about children\'s education.
Second, korea this nation doesn\'t have some resources, a large land, many populations and tour places attracting foreign tourists.
So, studying well only could develop the nation\'s economy.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! Your homework is good tonight! Just be careful in some nouns. Always remember to capitalize proper nouns like \"Korea\" or \"Korean\".
Thank you for doing your homework. Keep it up!
Until the next one!
See you in class ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>CORRECT
First, korean people think importantly studying level historically.
>>First, Korean people think importantly of studying level based from history.
In korea, studying is very important since ancient.
>>In Korea, studying is very important since the ancient time.
Nobles had to study.
>>CORRECT
And now, it became that people think studying make people\'s position get highly.
>>And now, it resulted to people thinking that studying make people\'s position high.
So, korean parents concern highly about children\'s education.
>>So, Korean parents are very concern about their children\'s education.
OR>>So, Korean parents are highly concerned about their children\'s education.
Second, korea this nation doesn\'t have some resources, a large land, many populations and tour places attracting foreign tourists.
>>Second, Korea, this nation doesn\'t have a lot of resources, lands, population and tourist destinations attracting foreign tourists.
So, studying well only could develop the nation\'s economy.
>>So, studying well is the only thing that could develop the nation\'s economy.
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