Why is studying well necessary especially in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Sheila!
Happy Monday! Happy this week!
I\'m Tony! My English name changed. What do you think about it?
thank you~ Good night!
Homework:
Why is studying well necessary especially in your country?
Education fever is especially phenomenon in South Korea. The Korean War broke out in 1950.
After The Korean War Armistice Agreement, South Korea\'s economic has experience high growth.
The older generation regard academic titles. To this day, early education and private lessons is very popular.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony! I think your name suits you well. It sounds good as well. It\'s perfect for you. :)
Until the next one! See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>Education fever is a special phenomenon in South Korea.
The Korean War broke out in 1950.
>>CORRECT
After The Korean War Armistice Agreement, South Korea\'s economic has experience high growth.
>>After the Korean War Armistice agreement, South Korea\'s economy has experience high growth.
The older generation regard academic titles.
>>The older generation regarded academic titles important.
OR>>The older generation gives importance to academic titles.
To this day, early education and private lessons is very popular.
>>To this day, early education and private lessons are very popular.
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