Why is swimming your favorite sport?

2022-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

Because I can\'t exercising on the ground well,but I can exercising in the water well and it\'s very exciting. So I love to exercising in the water especially I like swimming more.

강사 첨삭

Good morning again Daisy :)
Thank you for this. Do something that will give happiness to you :)
See you in class.
T. Aki~
Because I can\'t exercising on the ground well, but I can exercising in the water well and it\'s very exciting. 
>>> Because I couldn\'t exercise well on the ground bit I can in water and it\'s very exciting.
So I love to exercising in the water especially I like swimming more.
>>> So I love exercising in water especially that I like swimming

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