Why is vacation necessary?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because with out vacation, we can't take a real rest. Also if we have to go work on weekend we can't take a rest. Also without vacation, students can't focus on studying.
강사 첨삭
Because with out vacation, we can\'t take a real rest. Also if we have to go work on weekend we can\'t take a rest. Also without vacation, students can\'t focus on studying.
Vacation is necessary because without it, we couldn\'t take a real rest, without vacation students can\'t focus on studying and workers will be exhausted from work.
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