Why is your arm in a cast? Write about it.
학생이 쓴 원문
My arm in a cast because I broke my hand while I was beating Taekwondo so I take off cast in three weeks.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your third corrected composition, Yale. Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good rest and see you next class!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Why is your arm in a cast? Write about it.
My arm in a cast because I broke my hand while I was beating Taekwondo so I take off cast in three weeks.
>>> My arm is in a cast because I broke my hand during Taekwondo practice. The cast will be removed in three weeks.
>>> OR: I broke my hand while doing Taekwondo, so my arm’s in a cast. I’ll get it taken off in three weeks.
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