Why is your major and why did you choose that major

2017-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Hi Rose, Did you have a good rest? This is the answer for today's lecture. See you :) I majored in computer programming. At the previous company, I supported help desk to solve hardware issues. Since I was working, I have always interested in programming languages. This is because all hardware is controlled under programming languages. Also, I knew that working in software developer can provide me with opportunity to express myself creatively on a regular basis.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for asking, Mr. [이름]!

I am definitely okay!

How about you? I hope you spent a nice day with your family^^

See you later!

Hi Rose,
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Did you have a good rest?

>>CORRECT!
 This is the answer for today\'s lecture.
>>CORRECT!
See you :)
>>CORRECT!
I majored in computer programming.

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At the previous company, I supported help desk to solve hardware issues.

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Since I was working, I have always interested in programming languages.

>>Since I started working, I have always been  interested in programming languages.
This is because all hardware is controlled under programming languages.

>>CORRECT!

Also, I knew that working in software developer can provide me with opportunity to express myself creatively on a regular basis.

>>Also, I knew that working as a software developer can provide me with opportunity to express myself creatively on a regular basis.

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