Why is your major and why did you choose that major
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Hi Rose,
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Did you have a good rest?
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This is the answer for today\'s lecture.
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I majored in computer programming.
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At the previous company, I supported help desk to solve hardware issues.
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Since I was working, I have always interested in programming languages.
>>Since I started working, I have always been interested in programming languages.
This is because all hardware is controlled under programming languages.
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Also, I knew that working in software developer can provide me with opportunity to express myself creatively on a regular basis.
>>Also, I knew that working as a software developer can provide me with opportunity to express myself creatively on a regular basis.
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