Why might some Americans support strong action against Iran or Venezuela?
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Now, US citizens are suffering from deteriorating economy and unstable domestic market. Hence there are increasing number of people oppose taxpayers’ money to be used in events that are irrelevant to US wellbeing. However, there are still some people strongly supporting US government to act against adversaries and tackle international turmoil. This is because these people believe in US hegemony. They strongly believe US possesses economy and physical dominance compared to its peers. Accordingly, there are some cases that US must intervene to solve the global turmoil and tackle adversaries such as Iran and Venezuela. Secondly, the cases of Iran and Venezuela resulted Iranian and Venezuela citizens to suffer. Accordingly, many people believe that US must intervene to protect human rights and elevate the life of those in urgent situations. Even there are growing number of people opposing US intervention in Iran, there are some people asserting US intervention to quell death toll.
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Now, US citizens are suffering from deteriorating economy and unstable domestic market.
>>> Now, U.S. citizens are suffering from a deteriorating economy and an unstable domestic market.
Hence there are increasing number of people oppose taxpayers’ money to be used in events that are irrelevant to US wellbeing.
>>> Hence, there is an increasing number of people who oppose using taxpayers’ money on events that they see as unrelated to U.S. wellbeing.
However, there are still some people strongly supporting US government to act against adversaries and tackle international turmoil.
>>> However, there are still some people who strongly support the U.S. government acting against adversaries and addressing international turmoil.
This is because these people believe in US hegemony.
>>> correct
They strongly believe US possesses economy and physical dominance compared to its peers.
>>> correct
Accordingly, there are some cases that US must intervene to solve the global turmoil and tackle adversaries such as Iran and Venezuela.
>>> Accordingly, they argue that there are cases when the U.S. must intervene to solve global turmoil and confront adversaries such as Iran and Venezuela.
Secondly, the cases of Iran and Venezuela resulted Iranian and Venezuela citizens to suffer.
>>> Moreover, the cases of Iran and Venezuela resulted in Iranian and Venezuela citizens\' suffering.
Accordingly, many people believe that US must intervene to protect human rights and elevate the life of those in urgent situations.
>>> Many people argue that U.S. intervention is necessary to protect human rights and improve living conditions.
Even there are growing number of people opposing US intervention in Iran, there are some people asserting US intervention to quell death toll.
>>> Even though there is a growing number of people opposing US intervention in Iran, there are still some people asserting that US intervention will quell the death toll.
>>> OR: Even though there is a growing number of people opposing U.S. intervention in Iran and abroad — with majorities of Americans saying the U.S. has gone too far in using its military overseas — there are still voices asserting that intervention could help reduce death tolls and global instability.
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