Why my favorite cartoon character is mickey mouse
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My favorite cartoon character is mickey mouse.
That is because a lot of people know mickey mouse.
My second reason is mickey mouse\'s birth is very good.
My third reason is mickey mouse is easy to draw.
Finally, mickey mouse are very famous.
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>> My favorite cartoon character is Mickey Mouse.
That is because a lot of people know mickey mouse.
>> A lot of people know him.
My second reason is mickey mouse\'s birth is very good.
>> What do you mean?
My third reason is mickey mouse is easy to draw.
>> He is my favorite because he is easy to draw.
Finally, mickey mouse are very famous.
>> Moreover, he is very famous.
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