Why payment method is important?
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I think we pay for more money when using a credit card than when using a cash.
Because we don’t know actually how much money we use when using a credit card.
Using a credit card is convenient, but we should keep in mind the fact that we might be spending a lot of money.
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Hello Jenna! I really admire your effort in making your sentences. You are also trying your best to elaborate your sentences. Keep doing the nice work. We will talk about this in class. I will see you then. Keep safe! ~ T. Lyn
I think we pay for more money when using a credit card than when using a cash.
>>I think I pay more when I use my credit card than when I use cash.
Because we don’t know actually how much money we use when using a credit card.
Because we don’t know actually how much money we use when using a credit card.
>>It is because when you use your credit card, you never know how much money you actually spend.
Using a credit card is convenient, but we should keep in mind the fact that we might be spending a lot of money.
Using a credit card is convenient, but we should keep in mind the fact that we might be spending a lot of money.
>>Using a credit card is convenient, but keep in mind that it can end up costing you a lot of money.
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