Why should people around you, trust you? Give 3. :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, i don\'t think that people are around and trust me.. LOL :)
But, if people are really around and trust me, the reason is the time, relationship and trust that I have been with.
Firstly, The time that i spent to do something together is difficult to ignore on the human relationship. The memory is powerful to keeping relationship. Even if it doesn\'t special for them. I usually spent time to hang out with my friends, so there are around me.
second, There is a relationship in Korea that has to be maintained. For example, a relationship such as a senior or a co-worker at a school may cause a situation where you should not be around person.
Finally, I think there are many people around me because I have never lied or harmed others. Because no matter how much in bellow two even to meet the condition of those who can\'t believe no-one else around.
강사 첨삭
This is a very long answer. :D Thank you :)
>> Actually, I don\'t think that people around me trusts me.. LOL :)
But, if people are really around and trust me, the reason is the time, relationship and trust that I have been with.
>> If people are really around and trust me, it might be because of the relationship I had with him.
>> First, the time that I spent with them while doing something is difficult to ignore.
The memory is powerful to keeping relationship.
>> Memories are powerful in keeping relationships.
Even if it doesn\'t special for them. I usually spent time to hang out with my friends, so there are around me.
second, There is a relationship in Korea that has to be maintained.
>> Even if it is not special for them. I usually spend time with my friends, so there are around me.
>> Second, there are relationships in Korea that has to be maintained.
For example, a relationship such as a senior or a co-worker at a school may cause a situation where you should not be around person.
Finally, I think there are many people around me because I have never lied or harmed others. Because no matter how much in bellow two even to meet the condition of those who can\'t believe no-one else around.
>> For example, a relationship such as being a senior or a co-worker at a school may cause different situations.
>> Finally, I think there are many people around me because I have never lied or harmed others. It is because no matter how much we do, it depends on our connection with the people.
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