Why should people speak English?
학생이 쓴 원문
A lot of countries use English!
I think it's more difficult than Korean!
But a few countries use our Korean!
May be 10 years ago, any jobs will have English test!
And For development our Korea, we study English very hard!
Sarah, Fighting!!^^
강사 첨삭
Hi! Thank you for doing this composition. I appreciate it. Keep it up! Doing compositions will help you improve your English skills.
T. Grace
Here are my corrections for you:A lot of countries use English!
>> Correct!I think it\'s more difficult than Korean!
>> Correct!But a few countries use our Korean!
>> But a few countries use Korean language.May be 10 years ago, any jobs will have English test!
>> Maybe after 10 years all jobs will have English tests.And For development our Korea, we study English very hard!
>> And for the development of Korea we need to study English very hard.Sarah, Fighting!!^^
>> Sarah is fighting!
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