Why should people speak English?

2012-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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A lot of countries use English! I think it's more difficult than Korean! But a few countries use our Korean! May be 10 years ago, any jobs will have English test! And For development our Korea, we study English very hard! Sarah, Fighting!!^^

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thank you for doing this composition. I appreciate it. Keep it up!  Doing compositions will help you improve your English skills. T. Grace Here are my corrections for you:A lot of countries use English! >> Correct!I think it\'s more difficult than Korean! >> Correct!But a few countries use our Korean! >> But a few countries use Korean language.May be 10 years ago, any jobs will have English test! >> Maybe after 10 years all jobs will have English tests.And For development our Korea, we study English very hard! >> And for the development of Korea we need to study English very hard.Sarah, Fighting!!^^ >> Sarah is fighting!

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