Why should/shouldn\'t we have hobbies?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that we absolutely need to have hobbies.
Generally we have many kinds of obligations in our life.
Hobbies are different from obligations.
We should be able to enjoy our life.
We should be able to our money and time for enjoying our hobbies.
Hobby is the vitality of life.
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Why should/shouldn\'t we have hobbies?
I think that we absolutely need to have hobbies.
CORRECT!
or>>In my opinion, we certainly need to engage in some hobbies.
Generally, we have many kinds of obligations in our life.
CORRECT!
Generally, we have many kinds of obligations in our life.
CORRECT!
or>>Generally, we have all sorts of obligations in life.
Hobbies are different from obligations.
CORRECT!
or>>There is a difference between what is a hobby from an obligation.
We should be able to enjoy our life.
We should be able to enjoy our life.
CORRECT!
or>>We must enjoy our life.
We should be able to our money and time for enjoying our hobbies.
We should be able to our money and time for enjoying our hobbies.
>>We should be able to have money and time to enjoy our hobbies.
Hobby is the vitality of life.
Hobby is the vitality of life.
>>A bobby is the vitality of life.
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