Why should we study English?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many Korean start to study English when they learn any language.
If a child doesn't study English, he or she might be at a disadvantage to enter to a school of high.
I think it is ridiculous. We don't have to study English from so early. People who need English or like to study it have to study English. It makes sense.
강사 첨삭
Hi there thanks for sharing your opinions through this composition. You have a point there, but English is indeed necessary in Korean society, that’s why we have all these institutes and academies that offer English education. Well I hope that English would be easier to learn someday, ha ha. =) Here are your corrections, and I will talk to you in class. Take care!
&n[이름]p;Many Korean start to study English when they learn any language.
>>>Many Koreans start to study English when they learn a new language.If a child doesn't study English, he or she might be at a disadvantage to enter to a school of high.>>> If a child doesn't study English, he or she might be at a disadvantage to enter to a good school.I think it is ridiculous.
>>>Correct
We don't have to study English from so early.
>>> We don’t need to study English from a very early age.
>>>OR We don’t need to study English as early as that age.
People who need English or like to study it have to study English.
>>>Correct
It makes sense.
>>>Correct
>>>OR: &n[이름]p;It makes more sense that way.
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