Why soda is not good for health
학생이 쓴 원문
I think soda is bad for health.
That is because soda\'s acid is very high.
My second reason is soda is only a cold drink, but cold drinks are bad for health.
My third reason is the soda is too many in cold drinks.
Finally, too many sodas are rot teeth.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! I am glad to know that you know sodas are bad for your health. Please don\'t drink too much soda. Alright?
- Teacher Debbie
I think soda is bad for health.
>> I think soda is bad for our health.
That is because soda\'s acid is very high.
>> That is because soda is acidic.
My second reason is soda is only a cold drink, but cold drinks are bad for health.
>> It is also a cold drink, and cold drinks are also bad for our health.
My third reason is the soda is too many in cold drinks.
>> What do you mean?
Finally, too many sodas are rot teeth.
>> Finally, too many sodas rot our teeth.
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