Why the goals are important.
학생이 쓴 원문
Goals are important.
Because when we have a goal, we can be good people.
Second, when there is no goal, everyone can\'t be a good person.
Third, when we achieve the goal, we can have a lot of achievements.
Last, when we achieve the goal, there are a lot of options to be a good person.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Wow, I agree with that goals are important in our lives. Good job! Keep safe and see you soon~
~T. Annie
Goals are important.
>>Correct!
Because when we have a goal, we can be good people.
Because when we have a goal, we can be good people.
>>Correct!
Second, when there is no goal, everyone can\'t be a good person.
Second, when there is no goal, everyone can\'t be a good person.
>>Correct!
Third, when we achieve the goal, we can have a lot of achievements.
Third, when we achieve the goal, we can have a lot of achievements.
>>Correct!
Last, when we achieve the goal, there are a lot of options to be a good person.
Last, when we achieve the goal, there are a lot of options to be a good person.
OR>>Lastly, when we achieve the goal, there are a lot of options to be a good person.
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