why to many fitness
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently young guys and girls,
it is important how they look like other people in Korea.
so many people did plastic sergerry boys and girls.
i thinnk it is similar result.
point is how other people look at me beautiful
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ji An!
Recently young guys and girls, it is important how they look like other people in Korea.
>>> Recently, for young guys and girls, it is important how they look to other people in Korea.
so many people did plastic sergerry boys and girls.
>>> So many people did plastic surgery.
i thinnk it is similar result.
i thinnk it is similar result.
>>> I think it has a similar result.
point is how other people look at me beautiful
point is how other people look at me beautiful
>>> The point is, how beautiful other people would look at me.
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