Why would you care to provide what others ask from you?
학생이 쓴 원문
My personality is outgoing and leadership.
So if someone asks me for help, I will be care.
As possible as I want to help many people.
It is fortunate I have the talent to help others.
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Why would you care to provide what others ask from you?
My personality is outgoing and leadership.
>>My personality can be considered outgoing and I also have a distinct leadership skill.
or>>I possess both an outgoing personality and a leadership skill.
So if someone asks me for help, I will be care.
So if someone asks me for help, I will be care.
>>So, if someone asks me for help, I usually take care of it.
As possible as I want to help many people.
As possible as I want to help many people.
>>As much as possible, I want to help as many people as I can.
It is fortunate I have the talent to help others.
It is fortunate I have the talent to help others.
>>It is fortunate that I have the talent to help others.
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