Why would you like to go to Psy\'s concert?
학생이 쓴 원문
Isn\'t it obvious? He\'s a famous one of the [이름]gers in the world. Also, I\'ve never been there yet. During every summer season a lot of festivals would be open like lock, jazz and his concert. There is a place that I love to [이름]g a song together. :)
강사 첨삭
I hope you can have fun when you get the chance to go to his concert, [이름]! See you around!-Faith-
Isn\'t it obvious? >> Is it not obvious?
OR There is an obvious reason for that.
He\'s a famous one of the [이름]gers in the world.
>> He is one of the famous [이름]gers in the world.
Also, I\'ve never been there yet.
>> Also, I have never been there yet.
During every summer season a lot of festivals would be open like lock, jazz and his concert.
>> Every summer season, a lot of festivals open like lock, jazz and his concert.
There is a place that I love to [이름]g a song together. :)
>> That is a place that I love to [이름]g a song together with the crowd. :)
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