why you agree or disagree with the results
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Q : briefly discuss why you agree or disagree with the results. If you disagree with the results, which type do you feel more closely describes you and why?
I strongly agree with the results of Keirsey reports
I am from Korea, a highly bureaucratic society, I am affected a lot from society.
Especially Banks in Korea have the most conservative culture with strong hierarchy system.
I have been working in Korean Bank for 14 years. And I worked as a middle manager
So I did not surprise My temperament came out as the Guardian Supervisor (ESTJ),
Which regards industriousness (often uses same meaning of responsibilities in Korea) and authoritativeness are top priority.
Of course there are something in minor I did not agree, but in general I totally agree with the results
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I strongly agree with the results of Keirsey reports
>>> I strongly agree with the results of Keirsey result.
I am from Korea, a highly bureaucratic society, I am affected a lot from society.
>>> I strongly agree with the results of Keirsey result.
I am from Korea, a highly bureaucratic society, I am affected a lot from society.
>>> I am from Korea, a highly bureaucratic society, and I am affected a lot from the society.
Especially, banks in Korea have the most conservative culture with strong hierarchy system.
Especially, banks in Korea have the most conservative culture with strong hierarchy system.
>>> Especially Banks in Korea have the most conservative culture with strong hierarchy system.
I have been working in Korean Bank for 14 years. And I worked as a middle manager
I have been working in Korean Bank for 14 years. And I worked as a middle manager
>>> I have been working in a Korean Bank as a middle manager for 14 years.
So I did not surprise My temperament came out as the Guardian Supervisor (ESTJ),
Which regards industriousness (often uses same meaning of responsibilities in Korea) and authoritativeness are top priority.
Which regards industriousness (often uses same meaning of responsibilities in Korea) and authoritativeness are top priority.
>>> So I wasn\'t surprised when I became the Guardian Supervisor (ESTJ) because of my temperament which regards as industriousness (often has the same meaning of responsibility in Korea) and authoritativeness are the top priorities.
Of course there are something in minor I did not agree, but in general I totally agree with the results
>>>Of course there are minor things that I did not agree with but in general, I totally agree with the results.
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