Will online fitness classes become more popular in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I think that online fitness classes won\'t become more popular in the future.
Because a trainer can\'t correct my posture in person.
But it\'s good for people who have a perfect posture because they exercise for a long time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful night. :)
~ T. Tricia
No, I think that online fitness classes won\'t become more popular in the future.
>> CORRECT!
Because a trainer can\'t correct my posture in person.
>> CORRECT!
But it\'s good for people who have a perfect posture because they exercise for a long time.
>> But it\'s good for people who have a perfect posture because they have been exercising for a long time.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.