Will we remember or be able to look down on earth once we’re in heaven?

2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

God made all human that from mud. That is why if we dyed people go back in the ground. I believe human got a body and soul.when people passed a way our body disappeared but still alive human’s soul. I believe people soul is forever. My father passed away 12yeas ago. He is not in earth, but he is in my heart all the time.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]nah!

I think we will be able to look down on earth once we\'re in heaven. We will still be able to see the people we left behind. For me we will become the angles of God\'s people.

See you later!


-Teacher Shelly-


God made all human that from mud.

>>> Correct!

That is why if we dyed people go back in the ground.

>>> That is why if we die people will go back to the ground.
 I believe human got a body and soul.

>>> I believe humans have body and soul.

when people passed a way our body disappeared but still alive human’s soul.

>> If we die, our bodies disappeared but our soul is still alive.

I believe people soul is forever.

>>> I believe that our soul live forever.

 My father passed away 12yeas ago.

>>> Correct!
 He is not in earth, but he is in my heart all the time.

>>> He is not on earth, but he is in my heart all the time. 

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