Will you change something about arts if you have been given the chance? Why or Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not sure what you exactly meant, but let me try to answer.
If I get a chance to change about arts, I would like to change the incompetent gallery owner.
They must be professional, but in my experience, there is some gallerist who doesn\'t do their role.
It is a great error in the art world.
강사 첨삭
Hello Su! Thank you for answering your homework. It is very much appreciated. Please keep up the good work.
If I get a chance to change about arts, I would like to change the incompetent gallery owner.
>> If I get a change to change something about arts, I would like to change incompetent gallery owners.
They must be professional, but in my experience, there is some gallerist who doesn\'t do their role.
>> They should show professionalism at work. In my experience, the gallery owner I met doesn\'t do his/her role.
It is a great error in the art world.
>> It is not a good image in the art world. // >> The art world doesn\'t need such people.
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