Will you die without regrets in 20 years or will you live to the age of 100 when you have a lot of r
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If I die in 20 years, I will be only 50\'s. that\'s too fast.
I think there isn\'t a life without regrets.
I want to live for a long time.
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Hi [이름]! I would agree with your notion that there isn\'t life without any regrets, hopefully you can share more about this in our class. Like why you\'d wan to live for a long time and what are some of the regrets you\'ve had in your life. Anyway, job well done! ^^
~~ Teacher Ryka^^
If I die in 20 years, I will be only 50\'s. that\'s too fast.
>> If I day in 20 years that would make me only around my 50\'s and that\'s too fast.
I think there isn\'t a life without regrets.
>> CORRECT
I want to live for a long time.
>> CORRECT
>> If I day in 20 years that would make me only around my 50\'s and that\'s too fast.
I think there isn\'t a life without regrets.
>> CORRECT
I want to live for a long time.
>> CORRECT
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