Will you plan for an active trip or a relaxing trip? Why is that?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ll plan for an active trip. It\'s because I\'m still young and I have a energy to do active things.
A relaxing trip is a also good choice as well. But the reason that I cannot do active things when I\'m old and weak makes me choose an active trip.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ian! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You were able to answer the question. However, you have to be careful with articles.
- Debbie
I\'ll plan for an active trip.
>> This is a good sentence.
It\'s because I\'m still young and I have a energy to do active things.
>> It\'s because I\'m still young, and I have a lot of energy to do many things.
A relaxing trip is a also good choice as well.
>> A relaxing trip is also a good choice.
OR
>> A relaxing trip is a good choice as well.
But the reason that I cannot do active things when I\'m old and weak makes me choose an active trip.
>> However, I\'ll choose this when I\'m already old and weak. For now, I prefer active trips.
- Debbie
I\'ll plan for an active trip.
>> This is a good sentence.
It\'s because I\'m still young and I have a energy to do active things.
>> It\'s because I\'m still young, and I have a lot of energy to do many things.
A relaxing trip is a also good choice as well.
>> A relaxing trip is also a good choice.
OR
>> A relaxing trip is a good choice as well.
But the reason that I cannot do active things when I\'m old and weak makes me choose an active trip.
>> However, I\'ll choose this when I\'m already old and weak. For now, I prefer active trips.
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