Will you spend your leave or convert it into money? Share your answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I will choose to use my leave without a hesitation because i’m a bit of a home ludens type. I will enjoy watching Youtubes and cartoons from morning till night.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Judy!
I am sure you will. After all, you can make more money but not necessarily time. That is a very good choice.
Meanwhile, I Googled \'ludens\' as I read it here on your first sentences and I tried to understand what it means but I am still clueless until now. Maybe you can tell me about it in class later.
Thank you very much for this very good answer and see you soon in class!
-T. Donna~
>> I will choose to use my leave without hesitation because I’m a bit of a home buddy type.
I will enjoy watching Youtubes and cartoons from morning till night.
>> Correct!
Or: I will enjoy watching YouTube and cartoons from morning till night.
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